After the excitement of the action and climax within story, the final scenes tie off all remaining loose ends and bring the story to a satisfying and final resolution.E.g it is important to ensure that the story is tidied up such that the resolution of the story gives us a sense of final satisfaction with the whole situation.
The Abuse of Trust: Structure Plan
In the second half of this season we were able to use our information gathered from the meaning of the stages to then include it to our structure for a quality story.
Exposition/Set-up
My team and I thought that it would be more interesting we have conflicting characters . Having conflicting characters can help to draw the audience in ,more and wanting to find out more about the person.
Looking back at history in this time women were finally getting the respect that they needed and wanted. Women were finally independent. They could but be without a man and not mocked. our story captures how the older women in the past were treated and how they act know that society and racism was at ease with each other and taken advantage of.
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So to start off the story we will firstly introduce a protagonist.For example someone who smokes meaning that they stress.
In scene 1 all characters wakes up but differently. We have written some stage directions down to help when writing the script and the reader getting a fair idea of what each character is.
(Stage Direction scene 1 )
All wake up
Three characters freeze
VERA is unfrozen-counting money, receives a call
VERA freezes
MARY-ROSE is frozen-holding pills,crying,receives a call
MARY freezes
MICKEY unfrozen-smokes a cigarette,receives a call,starts arguing
MICKEY freezes
CLAIRE is unfrozen-looks in the mirror, receives call
(End of stage direction)
Going back to the thought that we have conflicting characters,means that they all have there wants as individual characters to have a conflict. Whatever is blocking the want is a conflict.For instance here are the characters wants.
MICKEY-Wants the lies of his wife to stop and never wants to be second best for his wife.
CLAIRE-Wants the power and lust from men.
VERA-Want her gambling addiction to go away and her temper to leave her life but cant stop.
MARY-ROSE-Wants clarity of who her parents are and stop with the suicidal thoughts.
Build-up/Blocked
For the build up scene the team wanted to do something different and have a flashback in time for our build up scene. doing a flashback scene brings the audience back in time for when women were still fight to be given rights so to depart from you husband and have baby with no financial support was mocked.So we decide to go all the way back to 1970.
In scene 2 the flashback CLAIRE cheats on MICKEY but has fallen pregnant with MICKEY's child but hasn't spoken a word of it to him .MICKEY neglects her when she cheats on him and is left to have a kid by herself. After holding her daughter MARY-ROSE for 9 months CLAIR decides to give her daughter up for adoption.CLAIRE doesn't want to face the embarrassment of having a kid and that someone better then her can do what she couldn't
Climax
As a team we discussed ways in which we could bring in VERA's character to link with the other characters situation. So we made VERA the adopted mother of MARY-ROSE who at first looks fit for the purpose but turns around to be a dead beat mother who abuses MARY-ROSE mentally and physically,by taking her anger of her being and addict out on MARY-ROSE.
In the climax we also want the audience to see what some people go through in a daily basis and that it is not easy. To see a grown women treating a young girl like this even when other women are fight for the right to be equal as men are in society and also where family lies.
Consequence
Our consequence scene will be the first big decision that MARY-ROSE makes which is to run away from the abuse and find her real family. In this scene we will see the first introduction of father and daughter in the present day when she looks for a place to stay. because CLAIRE was so selfish not to tell MICKEY about his daughter he had to first see her as a hurt teen who has had a bad past and that he wasn't there to take care of her like he should have.
Resolution
In the last scene MICKEY is at a lost for words that he had a daughter and that it was kept from him for so long. He wants to resolve this once and for all for the sake of his daughter only.
So to add another twist for the last scene we will be going back to the first scene with all of
them in in there rooms but on either end of each of there calls except for MICKEY,s call is MICKEY telling all of them to meet at a secret location to "chat".
They all get to the secret location. Everyone says there bit apologizing to each other ending the pain ,the shame and just admitting their faults.
The last part will be a monologue said by VERA talking to the audience sharing her life lesson and advising them.
The question behind our story is what mattered the most? The answer is family.
SESSION 3
By the end of session 2 our Papa Tango instructor was able to help us map out when everything was happening where how to get started on our scripts.
In this session we where able to sit together as a team and start writing on our scripts starting with our exposition and build up keeping in mind that we need 2 minutes for each scene. At the end of the scenes we will collectively do punctuation and spelling checks seeing as we we edited together at the same time on one document using google drive to us.
Session 4 By the end of session 3 we had the exposition and the build up done and dusted. We then went on to start the climax and the consequence. we did stumble across some trouble of keeping it short but not too so that our play isn't taking up too mush time.
we successfully find the stages and did our regular checks as a group.
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